Good points:
- The movie flows together nicely; the cuts don't make the clip seem unrealistic
- The match on action is good, there is no jump between the two cuts
- Nice use of different camera angles
- Its an original story line
Bad points:
- The story could be clearer, people may become confused about the point of the short film
- There is too much free hand filming, it takes away from the finish because the camera is sometimes 'shakey' and it isn't a point of view shot.
An improvement would be to use the tripod more often to add a better finish to the film. Also try more types of camera shots to add variety.
Tre you make soem really valid points here with good explanation of what makes them good and bad. It would be nice to see in more detail how you would improve it if this was a first edit. Also try to use more media langauge such as naming shot types and edit techniques accuratly.
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