Good points:
- The movie flows together nicely; the cuts don't make the clip seem unrealistic
- The match on action is good, there is no jump between the two cuts
- Nice use of different camera angles
- Its an original story line
Bad points:
- The story could be clearer, people may become confused about the point of the short film
- There is too much free hand filming, it takes away from the finish because the camera is sometimes 'shakey' and it isn't a point of view shot.
An improvement would be to use the tripod more often to add a better finish to the film. Also try more types of camera shots to add variety.
